The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparions where relevant
The presented diagram illustrates the production of chocolate.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 10 various stages, starting from growing the Cacao tree in different areas and ending with pressing the inner part ,and Linking Words
then
liquid chocolate is produced.
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Firstly
, the Cacao tree was grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Linking Words
Then
, red pods are harvested and white cacao Linking Words
beans
are inside them. In the following two stages, white Use synonyms
beans
are fermented by leaves and dried by sunlight. After that, they are put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry to the factory. Use synonyms
After
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this
stage has been completed, in the factory, they are roasted in 360 degrees. During the next stage, roasted Linking Words
beans
are put in a divider Use synonyms
and
outer shells are removed and the Correct word choice
apply
beans
are crushed. Use synonyms
At the end
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this
process, the inner part of Linking Words
Use synonyms
beans
is pressed by a roller and Correct article usage
the beans
finally
, liquid chocolate is produced.Linking Words
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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