The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.
The maps provide information on how the school area has been transformed from 1985 to now.
Overall
, it can be seen that new facilities
have been constructed to accommodate more students, which significantly narrowed the playing field. Additionally
, the library has completely disappeared as new facilities
(a computer room and new classrooms) have been constructed.
In 1985 the school area was separated by a road reaching large playing fields. On the east side of the lane there was a two-storeyed building which accommodated classrooms, on the opposite side of it there was a car park and another building also
functioning as a teaching space. Behind the classrooms, there was a huge library and an office building right after the entrance. These equipments made possible
to teach 1500 students.
Correct pronoun usage
it possible
However
, in recent years significant changes enabled to expand
Replace the word
expansion
the
capacity of the school up to 2300 students by extending the two-storeyed building with another floor and additional classroom Change preposition
of the
facilities
. The library was completely demolished, instead
, a new computer room has been established as a learning centre. Since new sport
Change the noun form
sports
facilities
including a pool and a fitness centre have been constructed the territory of the playground became
smaller. The middle road which has been substituted with trees yielded a narrow car park.Wrong verb form
has become
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