Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will replace traditional newspaper and magazine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some would argue that electronic books and other recent tech will take place
instead
of paper publishments. This
essay agrees with this
idea because such
issues are much more environmentally friendly also
journals are less comfortable in their usage.
Furthermore
, replacing common information carriers should be reasonable because apps present high-quality alternatives for one reason. It is the environmental damage. For example
, during research at Michigan State University, experts calculated that one book production takes 3 trees to be cut. As soon as the new way was found, it resulted in saving trees and improving the ecosystem in general. Moreover
, to avoid repetition of cases of the disappearances of Amazonian forests, the chief specialist recommended to use of electronic storage media.
In addition
, another reason why the spreading of tech should have existed is how it is convenient to use. The main disadvantage of any book is its size. However
, you need to have a bag for it, furthermore
, if you need the opinion of several authors you need a few or more books, definitely this
means the weight. At the same time, there is a trend of the ongoing popularity of printed materials among some demographics, but this
tendency does not replace the easement. For instance
, during exam preparation, one student has to deal with over 20 authors and spend about 3 hours a day in the library, says Mr. Johnson, the leader of the New York State University, according to
their research. Doubtless using the digital device allows students to be prepared at home with comfort.
In conclusion,in case traditional books are uncomfortable and toxic products. We should use a variant which has better characteristics, such
as measure, heaviness and absence of damage to the environment.Submitted by interclass1982 on
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task achievement
Ensure that all points made are fully developed and supported with clear examples. For instance, when mentioning environmental benefits, provide more specific data or contrast with the environmental impact of e-books.
coherence cohesion
Work on creating smoother transitions between sentences and paragraphs. This can help with the flow of the essay and make it easier for readers to follow your argument. Using cohesive devices like 'moreover,' 'furthermore,' or 'in addition to' can improve readability.
coherence cohesion
Focus on having a clear and concise introduction and conclusion. While the essay has these components, they can be more effectively expressed to outline the main points of your argument.
task achievement
The essay covers the topic comprehensively and responds well to the task by addressing the future of traditional print media in comparison to digital alternatives.
task achievement
Good use of examples related to the environmental impact of book production and the convenience of digital media. This helps in substantiating the argument effectively.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical structure to the essay, with distinct paragraphs addressing separate points, which helps in maintaining clarity.
coherence cohesion
The main points of the essay are clearly presented and supported, making it easier for the reader to follow the argument.
Your opinion
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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