The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The graph shows the report from a survey about tea and
coffee
buying and drinking behaviour in five cities in Australia. Categorized by colours, there are three categories which are people who bought fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, bought instant Use synonyms
coffee
, and went to a café for Use synonyms
coffee
or tea within the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks observed. Linking Words
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, the bar charts show similar patterns. Linking Words
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average, people in all five cities Change preposition
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resulted
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resulted from
the
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coffee
buying, and the least Use synonyms
are
always Unnecessary verb
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the
fresh Correct article usage
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coffee
buying.
Of the five cities, the peak number goes to Use synonyms
the
fresh Correct article usage
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coffee
buying in Melbourne and Hobart with just above 60%, which is nearly two times bigger than the lowest number, which is the number of Use synonyms
the
fresh Correct article usage
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coffee
buying in both Brisbane and Adelaide. Use synonyms
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buying, there Use synonyms
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only minor variances with no more than Change the verb form
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10
% difference.
In conclusion, there is no enormous fluctuation in Correct article usage
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overall
graph, all the bar chart shows similar characteristics.Add an article
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