The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The graph illustrates information about the
number
of overseas Use synonyms
visitors
to three different areas in a European country between the years 1987 and 2007: the Use synonyms
coast
, the Use synonyms
mountains
, and the lakes.
Use synonyms
Overall
, from the graph, it is visible that the most visited place was the Linking Words
coast
by the end of the period, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
mountains
had the lowest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
throughout the years.
Use synonyms
According to
the information, in the beginning, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who went to the Use synonyms
coast
was exactly 40,000. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
number
steadily increased over the years, reaching approximately 75,000 by 2007, showing a consistent upward trend.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
mountains
started with about 20,000 Use synonyms
visitors
in 1987. Use synonyms
Although
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
fluctuated slightly, it showed a gradual increase, reaching around 30,000 by 2007.
The lakes experienced a significant initial rise in Use synonyms
visitors
, starting from 10,000 in 1987 and peaking at about 75,000 in 1997. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
after
Linking Words
this
peak, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
declined sharply to approximately 50,000 by 2007.
To summarize, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
coast
saw a steady increase in Use synonyms
visitors
and became the most popular destination by 2007, the lakes had a dramatic rise and fall in popularity. The Use synonyms
mountains
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, had the least variation in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
, maintaining a relatively stable but lower level of tourism.Use synonyms
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