The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The graph illustrates information about the
number
of overseas visitors
to three different areas in a European country between the years 1987 and 2007: the coast
, the mountains
, and the lakes.
Overall
, from the graph, it is visible that the most visited place was the coast
by the end of the period, while
the mountains
had the lowest number
of visitors
throughout the years.
According to
the information, in the beginning, the number
of visitors
who went to the coast
was exactly 40,000. This
number
steadily increased over the years, reaching approximately 75,000 by 2007, showing a consistent upward trend.
In contrast
, the mountains
started with about 20,000 visitors
in 1987. Although
the number
of visitors
fluctuated slightly, it showed a gradual increase, reaching around 30,000 by 2007.
The lakes experienced a significant initial rise in visitors
, starting from 10,000 in 1987 and peaking at about 75,000 in 1997. However
, after
this
peak, the number
of visitors
declined sharply to approximately 50,000 by 2007.
To summarize, while
the coast
saw a steady increase in visitors
and became the most popular destination by 2007, the lakes had a dramatic rise and fall in popularity. The mountains
, on the other hand
, had the least variation in the number
of visitors
, maintaining a relatively stable but lower level of tourism.Submitted by dnm.best on
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