You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................,
Dear Jass,
I received your letter, I'm fine and hope you're
also
doing great. It's been a while
since we met each other. I'm writing this
letter to respond to the previous letter, you're asking me for some advice. My personal opinion is that you should try to find a job for a better career.
As I know you already finished your bachelor's degree in mechanical engineering which is enough to get a good job in the engineering field. Apart from that master's and any other course will need more time and money, and there will be no benefits in it for you.
Moreover
, a job will help you polish the skills that are necessary for growth in salary and designation in the company. While
, on the other hand
, If you further
continue your studies, you have to start from scratch after that course.
As far as I know, you have a lot of good options with good packages such
as automotive engineer, CAD technician and quality inspector. These jobs are well-paid and have good recognition throughout the world.
I hope you will understand now, what is important for you and choose the career path wisely.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents one clear idea or argument. Some paragraphs may benefit from a clearer focus on a single point to enhance readability and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices (linking words, pronouns, etc.) to connect sentences and ideas more seamlessly.
task achievement
Make sure to expand on why college might not be enjoyable by providing specific reasons based on your friend's preferences or past experiences, to better address that part of the prompt.
task achievement
Consider including some examples or personal anecdotes that could make the letter cooler and more engaging.
task achievement
Maintain a balance between personal opinion and practical advice to ensure you are thoroughly addressing the question prompt.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.