The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps illustrate changes which took place in Rye
mouth
village between the years Capitalize word
Mouth
of
1995 and Change preposition
apply
present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
, Rye Linking Words
mouth village
used to have an ordinary design with farmland, Correct your spelling
Mouth Village
forest
park, Correct article usage
a forest
fishing
port and Correct article usage
a fishing
shop
which became more sophisticated in terms of entertainment with the facilities of Correct article usage
a shop
golf
course, tennis court, apartments and restaurants.
Correct article usage
a golf
According to
the map, the farmland Linking Words
in
the northeast side of the map Change preposition
on
demolished
and in its place golf course and tennis court were constructed. In 1995, there was not any car park and Add a missing verb
was demolished
present
we can see Change preposition
at present
car
park next to the hotel in the southeast. Another significant change is that, in the past, there were shops and now Correct article usage
a car
instead
of shops several restaurants have been built on the opposite side of the apartments where previously fish Linking Words
market
were located. There is Fix the agreement mistake
markets
also
an increase in the total number of houses, from 12 in 1995 to 16 at present. Linking Words
Finally
, the hotel and cafe in the southeast remained the same.
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