The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the ages and number of people in two countries,
Yeman
and Italy in 2000 and anticipations for 2050.
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Yemen
Overall
, in Yeman the the
individuals in Remove the redundancy
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15
-59 Correct article usage
the 15
age
catagory
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category
is
predicted to increase remarkably in 2050 Change the verb form
are
while
the same is expected to happen in over
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the over
age
group.
In detail, in Yeman, in the year
2000 majority , half of the population was represented by children of 14 years or less , and
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tiny
minority by over Change preposition
by tiny
60
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60-year
year
adults and the rest, 46.3% by the 15-59 age
category. Whereas
, the 15-59 year
category is predicted to increase by 10% in the year
2050 while
the number in 0
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the 0
age
group will be reduced by 12.9% in 2050.
Furthermore
, in Italy the overwhelming majority, 61.6% was recorded in the year
2000 by the 15-59 age
group and it is projected to Add a missing verb
be recuced
recuced
by 15.4% in 2050. Correct your spelling
reduced
reduce
However
, nealy
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nearly
fifth
of Correct article usage
a fifth
over
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the over
60
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60-year
year
population in the year
2000 is estimated to increase by 18.2 % in the yer
2050.Correct your spelling
year
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