You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket

Dear James, I am writing to inform you that I have a single ticket for Taylor Swift's Eras tour

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held in Montreal on June 08,

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at Wintson Stadium.

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will start around 10:30;

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, you need to arrive at the venue

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at least

two hours early to complete your registration and check-in procedures. Unfortunately, I need to give away my ticket because on that exact date when

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is held, I need to visit my mother; since she was hospitalized for her Kidney operation.

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, I will need to cancel my plans to attend

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and have to take care of my mother in her

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post-surgery

sickness. In case you are interested in attending

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I can hand over my ticket to you at our

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local Library around 5:30 pm on June 07, 2025. I will wait for your confirmation. Best regards, John

apexavaru5Fri Jun 06 2025

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Try to add more personal touches or feelings about missing the concert.

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Separate each main point into its own paragraph for better flow.

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You clearly stated the concert details and your situation.

coherence and cohesion

Your closing is polite and invites a response, which is good.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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