Some children spend hours every day on their smart phones. Why is this, the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Progressing technology and

availability

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of electronic gadgets have resulted in spending excess time on

cellphones

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cell phones

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or tablets, especially, among the younger generations.

While

some would argue that the

overall

impact of

this

trend has been positive, in

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essay I would contend that

the

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utilizing smartphones by school

children

would

constitutes

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some potential risks and

also

explain some sources of

this

phenomenon. First of all, it is an

undisputable

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fact that the pandemic of Covid 19 in

2020had

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2020 had

a significant role in

prevailing

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cellphones among school

children

. Breaking out

this

fatal disease , confronted

education

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the education

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system

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all over the world with recession. In order to deter the crisis of illiteracy, online education,

therefore

, became a constructive solution in that situation. So,

this

became a persuasive excuse for utilizing electrical gadgets including tablets or cell phones by

children

for the purposes of education.

Furthermore

, good-looking games, provided for younger age groups

has

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attracted their attention exponentially and distract them from more crucial educational subjects. More importantly, technology has revolutionized the way we communicate and facilitated the flow of information.

Nonetheless

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it has been accompanied

with

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some challenges like social isolation; a situation seen in

children

who, spend too much time

at

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on

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their

cellphones

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cell phones

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, Rather than relating to peers in the real world. Continuing

this

trend, particularly without supervision on the part of parents, educational systems,

as well as

governments, will

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fall to their collaborative skills and sense of community. Admittedly, unlimited availability of these gadgets accompanied with access to the internet could expose

children

to a vast amount of information that some would consider offensive or dangerous ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make a bomb. By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that there is no necessity to possess smartphones from

such

an early age.

Instead

encouraging

children

to take part in

the

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real physical or mental activities would be more advisable and justifiable.