The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs depict the ownership differences of electrical tools like washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners, and the frequency of doing household chores that are measured in hours in a certain country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is noticeable that all of these applicants experienced a growth in a
number of usages, Correct article usage
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however
, the hours spent on doing household chores had significantly dropped in this
period.
To begin
with, the first graph shows that in 1920, washing machines were the most used applicant that 40% of individuals used, but the number had a plateau and eventually reached the maximum of 70% in 2019. Refrigerators, on the other hand
, were the least popular electrical applicants that nobody showed interest in using them at first,
however
, the data had sharply increased, as by the year 2019, all the households owned it. Vacuum cleaners, therefore
, were used by 20% of people and eventually reached the highest percentage of 100%.
On the contrary
, the data illustrates that half of notions were doing housework every hour, although
, the number decreased every year from the starting point in 1920, as by 2019, only one out of ten households, doing the chores in each living place per hour.Submitted by vaniaa.z.h2005 on
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