Recently You Had A Holiday Overseas And You Stayed With A Family Member Who Has Just Sent You A Letter And Some Photos Of Your Holiday. Write A Letter To Your Family Member. In Your Letter: – Thank Him/Her For The Photos And For The Holiday – Explain Why You Didn’t Send A Letter Earlier – Invite Your Family Member To Come And Stay With You

Dear John, I hope things are going well. The reason I am writing is that I have just received the photos you sent.

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with, allow me to express my gratitude, the photographs reminded me of the good times and I wanted to thank you for the vacation and the pictorial memories. I really appreciate the time you devoted to taking me around and your great hospitality. I was not able to write to you earlier as I have been frantically busy with work since the moment I came back to the office. To be honest, I have to bring work home every day

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so that I can finish it before the deadline.

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, I would like to extend an invitation for you to be my guest. I remember you said that you needed a vacation and it would please me greatly if you

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come to Thailand as there are many things I would like to show you. Of course, you must stay at our house during the vacation. Thanks again for your photos and let me know if you decide to come here. Best regards, Tim

amandacflago23Fri Mar 15 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses only on one main idea to maintain clarity throughout your letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

Try to diversify the structures of your sentences to enhance the richness of your language.

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Consider adding more details or examples to fully explain your points, particularly when explaining the reasons for your delay in responding or outlining the activities you plan to show your family member during their visit.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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