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Write a letter to your friend who is interested in learning how to drive. In your letter ● say why a driving license is advantageous( more convenient to travel, more employement) ● recommend a driving school( instituation cost 599 to guve driving classes ● give any extra guidance /tips( friend gt training who has experience 5 yesrs

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Dear Aman, I'm writing
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 letter to let you know about the driving classes in Canada in which you showed your interest in our
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 conversation. Actually, the rules of driving in Canada are entirely different as compared to our host country as it is categorized into three levels i.e. G1, G2, and
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 . As a recent immigrant, you should know that you can get better job opportunities
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 as Uber and skip driver if you have a
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- license. On top of that, it would be convenient to travel a long distance. I would suggest
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''The Grey Driving Institution'' It is certified by the Ontario government in Canada and charges 500 dollars which includes online classes for the G1 test and 10 in-person lessons of G2 and
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 by an expert. Aside from the official instructor, you can save you're money if you take the driving lessons to your friend, who has more than five years experience in driving. Apart from that, if you have your home country's license for 5 years old, you can skip the G2 test and just go throw only the
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 test. If you have any questions about
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 you can contact me through WhatsApp. Best Regards, Jass

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Coherence and Cohesion
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General
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