Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter will find you healthy. I have lived in Star Street since 2014. Our area has a lot of this
information from your work website. That is
why I am writing to you for an offer.
This
building is very precious to the local crowd. They think this
premises very wonderful and useful. That is
right. More tourists have been visiting our hometown to see this
historical building since 2015. Because it is very famous between than other historical building. We will try to rate this
building with your help.
If you will change your plan, this
building will be preserved. We use this
project for tourism. The reason for our area will be very developed. If you will accept my offer, our local valantiours and sponsors will pay all expenses. In my opinion, this
plan is very useful for all.
I look forward to hearing from you, as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
JonySubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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structure
Make sure your letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a specific point.
coherence
Use transitions and linking words to improve the flow of your sentences and paragraphs.
greeting and closing
Personalize your greeting and closing more specifically if possible, especially if you know the name of the city planning manager.
task response
Address all parts of the prompt clearly: explain why the building shouldn’t be demolished, suggest future uses, and recommend ways to raise funds. Ensure each section is distinct and well-developed.
tone
For a more formal tone, avoid contractions ('I'll' to 'I will') and informal phrases. Use formal vocabulary and phrases appropriate for a letter to a city official.
grammar
Proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors, ensure proper tense usage, and enhance clarity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite