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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of
people
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 who use various
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number
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 of social networking in Canada between 2014 and 2015. Units are measured in per cent.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the percentage of
people
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 using multiple social networking
sites
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different
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 trend over one year.
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, the significant change is
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 using one site social media that witnessed a dramatic fall. In terms of the
number
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 of social networking that
people
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 most used, one site
social
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 networking started at just above 35.
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, the
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 drastically
drop
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 to 28 in 2015.
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, there are many
people
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 who use two kinds of social media which stood at 23 in 2014,
then
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 had a really slight increase to 24 in the next year. Regarding the other range of networking
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 that
people
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 used, in 2014, there are 22
of
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people
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 that did not active
in
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on
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 any
sites
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although
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 the
number
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 went down by 1 in 2015.
However
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 who use three, four, or even five
sites
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increase
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 throughout the given period. The percentage
begin
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 at 12, 5, and 2 respectively in 2014 before growing in the next season.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number, sites with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart overview
  • social networking sites
  • trends
  • adoption
  • comparison
  • significant changes
  • segment
  • growth or reduction
  • social media habits
  • patterns
  • multi-platform usage
  • decline
  • non-users
  • conclusion
  • digital communication
  • social media marketing
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