The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates how many overseas
visitors
to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the Linking Words
visitors
of coast and mountains rose over the period of time. Meanwhile, lake Use synonyms
visitors
' witnessed a significant drop Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
years
.
In terms of the area which experienced a dramatic drop, the visitor Fix the agreement mistake
year
of
the lakes started at 10 in 1987. The number of Change preposition
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
visitors
increased gradually Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
soared to reach Correct word choice
and then
it
peak at around 75. Between 2002 and 2007, the lake Change the pronoun
its
visitors
' dramatically fallen hit a through at exactly 50.
Regarding the other two areas, the coast and the mountains Use synonyms
visitors
' stood at precisely 40 and 20 respectively. In the following years, the Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
of
the coast had a slight Change preposition
to
decreased
to about 37 but Replace the word
decrease
then
grew Linking Words
up
gradually Change preposition
apply
reach
a peak of approximately 75. Wrong verb form
reaching
However
, the Linking Words
visitors
Use synonyms
of
the mountains were at the lowest level compared to the two other areas Change preposition
to
although
the Linking Words
Use synonyms
visitors
went up throughout the given period to just below 30 in 2007.Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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