The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
This
line chart depicts the figure of crimes for 3 different types that occurred in the period between 2003 and 2012 in the Newport city centre.It is clear from the graph that , there was a decrease in the number of incidents in Newport City.
According to
what is shown, robbery and car theft have similar patterns There started to drop the number of crimes in 2006 year then
went up and down for the interval 2007 until 2012.On the other hand
, burglary reached its highest peak in 2004 after that was decreased significantly in the number of incidents until 2008 then
consistent in the last
4 years.
To sum up
, we could say that, robbery and car theft have the same level comparing burglary.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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