You organised a birthday party at your place and borrowed something from your friend for the same. But it was damaged at the party. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, describe what it was how it was damaged what you will do about it
Dear Odina,
I hope you are OK. And first of all, I want to thank you for borrowing my Polaroid
camera
for my birthday. I am very grateful to you.
If it weren't for you, I wouldn't be able to capture these moments. But it’s a pity that you weren’t there that day. Your parents told me that you are on a business trip. Your camera
helped me a lot. But there's bad news, basically, your camera
is a bit broken. I don't know how this
happened. It accidentally fell from my hands when I was taking pictures of my friends. I am now very ashamed in front of you, I really regret that I dropped your camera
, please forgive me.
And in honour of the apology, I propose to meet and buy you exactly the same camera
as yours. And treat with something. I hope you forgive me.
Yours faithfully,
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Task Achievement
To improve task response, ensure that all parts of the prompt are answered in more detail. While you addressed each component, elaborating on how the item was damaged and what you plan to do about it could strengthen your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, consider adding more transition words or phrases between sentences and paragraphs to ensure the ideas flow more smoothly and the letter reads more naturally.
General Writing Skills
Utilize varied sentence structures and incorporate a range of vocabulary to enhance your writing. This will make your letter more engaging and will showcase your language skills.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,