Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
There is an ongoing controversy between scientific researchers and animal conservationists about the
use
of animals
in experimentation
stage Correct article usage
the experimentation
in
discoveries. Change preposition
of
Although
there is
some ethical and moral issues underlying animal Change the verb form
are
experiments
, because of the lack of methods that scientists can use
, there is no other way from
them to not experiment on Change preposition
for
animals
.
First of all, use
of Correct article usage
the use
animals
on
Change preposition
in
experiments
can be marked as a right action on
the medical field. Every new Change preposition
in
innovations
Change to a singular noun
innovation
of
Change preposition
in
this
particular field should first pass the test on animals
, then
can be distributed for
humans, in case Change preposition
to
for preventing from
adverse effects on Change preposition
to prevent
human
body. Add an article
the human
In addition
, good
illustration of Add an article
a good
this
is vaccination
program which is run by Correct article usage
the vaccination
World
Health Organization. Very few adverse effects were caught after the vaccines Correct article usage
the World
distributed
Add a missing verb
were distributed
for
people. The reason for Change preposition
to
this
is that the vaccines were qualified after lot
of lab Change the article
a lot
experiments
which included testing on wildlife. Likewise
, evolution
of each certified medicine followed the same path. Add an article
the evolution
Moreover
, medicine companies will have the opportunity to change or restart their work, if they notice some error in their testing stage.
On the other hand
, there is
insufficient replacements for Change the verb form
are
this
occasion. To be honest, we had
not found any other way to replace the Wrong verb form
have
use
of wildlife. Albeit, there is an
chance for a technology to change the status in the future. Until Change the article
a
then
we should use
the traditional way.
In conclusion, there are rights for doing
Change preposition
to do
experiments
on animals
for now. Until we can replace the animals
usage with Change to a genitive case
animal's
animals'
technologies
help, we should focus on improvements Fix the agreement mistake
technology
on
technology.Change preposition
in
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Consider a more nuanced argument. While supporting the use of animal testing, also address the ethical concerns and potential for harm, offering a balanced view.
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Provide specific examples to support your arguments. For instance, mention a particular vaccine that went through animal testing, detailing the process and outcomes.
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- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
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