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The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last one year

The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last one year
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The graphic chart was displayed to roughly calculate the world's uneducated
rates
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 by region and sex in one previous year. On the whole, uneducated
women
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 were always higher than
men
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 in all
regions
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.
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, South
Asia
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 had the highest number of uneducated
regions
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.
However
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, developed
countries
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 were the least uneducated, both for
men
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 and
women
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. In terms of
women
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, in developed
countries
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, the rate of
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unliterate
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nonliterate
women
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 was approximately just over 0%. And
this
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 rate was rising in five other
regions
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. The rate in Latin America/Caribean was slightly more than 10%,
while
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 in East
Asia
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 and Oceania it was 20%. For the rest of the three
regions
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—South Saharan Africa, Arab States,
South
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and South
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Asia
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—the
rates
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 of these
unliterate
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 were rocketed significantly, at 48% and 52%, respectively, and reached a peak at 55%.
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,
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unliterate
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nonliterate
men
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 had different
rates
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 in six
regions
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. The
least
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lowest
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 and highest
unliterate
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rates
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 were the same as for
women
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, which were in developed
countries
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 and South
Asia
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, roughly just over 0% and  30%, respectively. The second and third highest uneducated
men
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 were in South Saharan Africa and Arab States, at slightly over 30% and almost 30%, respectively.
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, the least uneducated
men
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 after developed
countries
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 were in East
Asia
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/Oceania and Latin America/Caribean, at 8% and 10%, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, women, men, regions, asia, countries, unliterate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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