the diagram shows the butterfly cycle

the diagram shows the butterfly cycle
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Contained in the diagram is information about the cycle of a butterfly.
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, the life cycle of a butterfly consists of 6 stages, commencing with laying eggs on the left to becoming a
caterpillar
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and
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culminating with a fully grown adult. In the initial stage, the female butterfly lays hundreds of eggs on the surface of the leaf which remain for 3 to 5 days before hatching to become an infant
caterpillar
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. Once the
caterpillar
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appears, it will eat the eggshell first and continue eating leaves for most of the time leading to rapid growth in size. Having completed all of these steps, the
caterpillar
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is going to move on to the next point where it will be able to make the chrysalis and attach themselves to the underside of the leaf after shedding apply several times and moulting. At
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point, depending on the temperature, the period of pupa phase can
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between 8 and 14 days. In the next moment, the chrysalis will turn clear and reveal the butterfly inside
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simultaneously the monarch emerges from the pupa. At the penultimate stage of its development, the butterfly remains motionless in order to wait for the wings to be fully unfolded
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dried and the cycle starts again.

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