The maps below show the changes that have taken place in the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps below illustrate the modifications that have happened in the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
there was a
It is clear that
there are significant changes including recreational facilities, accommodation and railway
.
In 1990, in the northwest and southwest of the city
there were residential areas with lots of trees. Add a comma
city,
Also
, in the middle of the resort, there was a wide road which accessed from north to the sea. In the northwest of the map, there was a health center
and education place with some houses near them. Change the spelling
centre
Also
right behind themAdd a comma
,
railway
station.
15 years later in 2005, in the southeast of the seaside, the houses were demolished and new buildings were constructed as well as
new
series Correct article usage
a new
supermarkets
. Change preposition
of supermarkets
Also
, in the middle of the resort green space was knocked down and four houses were made. In the north of the map
trees were chopped and three buildings were replaced. Alongside the sea new Add a comma
map,
railway
was built and in the west of the railway
new ferry was developed. Also
,the forest was demolished and
the factory was renovated as well a new airport was constructed near the school.Correct word choice
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