The map show the changes of Bell Hill Farm in 1976 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Given maps illustrate the evolution of the Environmental
Centre
from Bill Hill Farm
over 3 decades. It is clear from the graph that , it is clear that
radical transformations occurred in the farm
over the period and it was totally converted into an environmental centre
.
According to
what is shown, In 1976, the Farmyard was situated in the heart of the Farm
. At the top of it was a Barn, and to the right side of this
facility, there was a shed in order to keep cows. In the vicinity of the shed was located Chicken Farm
. The farmhouse was laid out on the bottom of the Farmyard. Finally
, there was special storage for farm
machines on the left side at the top.
To sum up
, we could say that, it comes Environmental centre
storage was replaced with parking. The multimedia room was opened instead
of the old barn facility. Previous sheds gave their place to student hosting. A recreational area for entertainment was created in the centre
. Only the farmhouse did not see any exchanges over the period.Submitted by Leb.7149 on
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