The tables show the populations of eight capital and eight provincial cities in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides information about the
number
of people in rural and urban areas in the year 1999. It is clear from the graph that , the largest number
of different nationalities lived in the city while
only a small fraction of people lived in the countryside.
According to
what is shown, To begin
with, 99% of Chinese citizens were living in urban areas in the year 1999, which was the highest proportion among other nationalities. It was followed by New Zealanders, British, and Dutch with 90%, 89%, and 83%, respectively. Meanwhile, only 80% of Australians preferred city life, the lowest percentage in all.
To sum up
, we could say that,the difference between people living in the countryside was evidently low. The number
of Australians that were living in the urban area was 20%, the highest number
in a regional area. With regards to Dutch, British, and New Zealanders, it only ranged from 10 to 17%. Lastly
, the remaining 1% of Chinese was
situated in rural areas.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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