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You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to your home country leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to - Thank him - Explain the reason you left without completing your course - say during your course study what did you like most about this course

#english #country #home #course #teacher #reason #study
Dear Mrs Sevara, Thank you for your support during
this
 tough time .It was really kind of you to help me that you supported me educationally for the knowledge which was so important for my study.The reason for going to
course
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 is your own guidance.
Firstly
,
l
 really appreciate
you
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that
this
 support was not only important for my study , but
also
 it was crucial to start my study as
l
 could acquire for my English lessons at school .
Moreover
, It was an unforgettable event that you
also
 helped
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me overcome my stress and depression because at that time
l
 was struggling with my health by overthinking
of
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my learning language issues .
As a result
 , you twice assisted me
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 my
both
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problems in my life .
Secondly
 ,
l
 would say that
l
bound
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 to return my home on account of unexpected
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whereas
 the course is undone .
Furthermore
, you will stay in my memory by your interactive teaching methods, diversity of the coursework,
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 applications.
Thus
 ,
l
 am always ready to help back you at
anytime
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 and anywhere. Thank you again for taking the time out of your schedule to help me and
l
 really appreciate your kindness. I look forward to receiving from you , Yours faithfully, Khayitova Gulbahor.
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structure
Structuring your letter into clear paragraphs will enhance coherence. Each paragraph should represent a distinct point or idea
grammar
Review grammar and punctuation to improve clarity. Use a variety of sentence structures and check for run-on sentences
task response
Ensure your reason for leaving the course is clearly stated and developed. It's a key part of the task but seems briefly touched upon
language use
Consider using more precise and varied language to convey your thanks and to describe your experiences. This adds depth to your letter
tone
Your opening and closing are polite, appropriate, and set the tone of the letter well
task response
You effectively convey gratitude to your teacher, which is a key part of the task
content
The appreciation for the teacher's methods and the impact on your study and well-being is well noted

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • premature departure
  • unexpected situation
  • emergency
  • necessitated
  • regret
  • interactive teaching methods
  • diversity of the coursework
  • practical applications
  • material covered
  • guidance
  • support
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