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The tables below show how much chalk an average school classroom consumes in South America over 10 years

The tables below show how much chalk an average school classroom consumes in South America over 10 years
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The given tables illustrate the amount of
chalk
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 which was consumed by South American classrooms in a decade.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all kinds of
chalk
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 had
increase
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increased
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 with white
chalk
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was
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consumed more than
colored
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coloured
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chalk
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. It should
also
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 be noted white
chalk
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 was used in Mathematics the most,
while
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colored
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coloured
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chalk
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 was consumed mostly by Art. Regarding
to
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white
chalk
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, both Mathematics and Chemistry was increased almost
double
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doubled
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 in use from 219 and 55 to 420 and 100
pieces
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 over 10 years. In
term
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terms
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 of Literature, white
chalk
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was
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apply
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decreased slightly
at
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to
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 nearly 110
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 in a decade. As for other subjects, it had little increase at under 110
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 with the exception of English which
was
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remained steady at 69
pieces
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 between 2009 and 2019. Turning to colored
chalk
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, all given subjects
were went
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went
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 down slightly in use at under 90
pieces
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 except for Art which
was
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went up significantly from 312 to 350
pieces
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 over 10 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chalk, pieces with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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