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The charts below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
#changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country
The line chart illustrates changing doing housework by electric machines in
household
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households
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 from 1920 to 2019.
According to
 the graph, it can be seen that
tendency
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of buying
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to buy
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 electrical appliances is upward trend
whereas
 the number of
doing
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housework
hour
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hours
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 per week is downward trend. Apparently, the proportion of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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was
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dramatically increased to 55% within 20 years and
peak
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peaked
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 at 100% in 1980.
In addition
, the vacuum cleaner was rose steadily
since
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from
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 1920 to 2000 and stable
to
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in
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 2019
while
 the washing machine
was fluctuate
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fluctuated
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 wildly
in
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from
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 1920 to 1960
was increased
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and declined
in
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from
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 1980 and back to
rise in
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2000 to 2019. Looking at the second chart, the number of housework
was
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dropped slightly in 1920, 1940, and 1960
is
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50, 35, and 20 hours per week respectively. After that, between 1980 and 2000 was
maintain
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 the same level until 2019 was
bottom
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 out
approximately
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at approximately
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 10 hours per week.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • increase
  • decrease
  • limited access
  • introduction
  • tasks
  • efficient
  • rely
  • technological advancements
  • socioeconomic factors
  • availability
  • resulted in
  • leisure time
  • correlation
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