The charts below show how global water resources are distributed

The charts below show how global water resources are distributed
The charts describe the distribution of water resources across the globe. All in all,
while
our global community has been trying to deal with the scarcity of freshwater, the availability of renewable freshwater between continents shows a huge gap, which is that South America has become the biggest supplier of renewable freshwater,
while
Oceania is the converse.
Firstly
, freshwater accounts for only three
percent
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of the global water resource, with the oceans providing the remaining portion.
Moreover
, one of the solutions to freshwater's problems, namely, renewable freshwater (
for example
, lakes, rivers, and
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surface freshwater), shares only around one
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of the total freshwater supply,
while
the majority of it has been contributed by glaciers and ice cabs
as well as
groundwater, which share 68.70
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and 30.10
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, respectively.
Furthermore
, South America and Asia have become the biggest suppliers of renewable freshwater energy, contributing around 17,000 and 15,000 km3, respectively. On a different angle, Africa and Oceania considerably show a significant gap, representing only one-third and one-eighth of South America's share, respectively.
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