The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years
The pie charts illustrate the devices people in the 18 to 25 age range used to watch television in Canada in two different years (2009-2019).
Overall
, conventional TV
was the main device use
in the first Replace the word
used
year
, while
the flat screen was the highest in the second year
. Moreover
, tablet
was the lowest used device in 2009 , Add an article
the tablet
a tablet
whereas
in the second year
, conventional TV
was the least prefered
deviceCorrect your spelling
preferred
. .
The percentage of conventional Replace the punctuation
.
...
TV
recorded in Canada by youths made up just over a third (34%) in 2009 and this
then
declined to just 4% in 2019. Similarly
, laptops accounted for one-fifth in the first year
after which it fell to 12% in the second year
. Also
, the desktop showed a downward trend form
one-fifth to 12% after a decade.
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from
On the other hand
, mobile phones recorded less than a fifth in 2009 before they went up to just over the quarter. Likewise
, flat screen TV
was (8%), and then
it increased by 19% . Ultimately, tablets recorded (5%) in the first year
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