The charts below show the total number of students who studied English in Vietnam from 2015 to 2018, and their purposes of learning English. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph below gives information about the figures of students
learned
English Correct pronoun usage
who learned
along
with
the pie chart illustrates the percentage of purposes in Vietnam between 2015 and 2018.
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It is clear that
the number of every age groups
shows Fix the agreement mistake
group
a
increase, except the Change the article
an
35
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35-year-old
years
old group. Moreover
, in pie
chart, the main target Add an article
a pie
the pie
studying
English was Change preposition
for studying
aboard
education.
In the bar graph, in 2015, the range of 13-16 Correct your spelling
abroad
years
old, 17-24, 25-34 and 35+ launched with 0.1, 9, 2 and 3 respectively. In the next 2 years
, in 2017, while
17
-24 Correct article usage
the 17
ages
group boomed more than double from 8 to 20 and Change the noun form
age
the
similar trend Correct article usage
a
occured
in Correct your spelling
occurred
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-16 and 25-34 Correct article usage
the 13
years
old
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ages
group Change the noun form
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stayed
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after a decrease. In Wrong verb form
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the finally
finally
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final
year
of research, in 2018, the 17-24 Add an article
the year
years
old peaked at 40, which was the highest, following
was 13-16 Wrong verb form
followed
years
old with not
change Correct your spelling
no
along with
8 in 25-34 years
old and 5 in 35+.
In pie
charts, the main aim accounted for 58 Correct article usage
the pie
percent
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per cent
belonged
to overseas education, the lower had school graduation at 23 Wrong verb form
belonging
percent
and immigration at 19 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. In 2018, the proportion of aboard Change the spelling
per cent
study
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studies
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narrow
down Replace the word
narrowing
43
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to 43
percent
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per cent
Whereas
the school graduation dropped 7 percent
, the Change the spelling
per cent
remain
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remaining
insteaded
of Correct your spelling
instead
schook oppoturnities
with 6 Correct your spelling
school opportunities
percent
. Work Change the spelling
per cent
oppoturnities
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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