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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
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Tables
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The tables
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 show information about
sales
 of
coffee
 and
bananas
 in 1919 and 2004 in five countries of Europe.
Sales
 of
coffee
 and
bananas
 illustrated by millions of euros.
Overall
,
sales
 of
coffee
 In 1999 in Switzerland land
was
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were
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 the highest which was 3
million
of
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apply
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euros And it was the highest which
is
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was
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 20
million
 in 2004 in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom .
Sales
 of
bananas
 were rated highest in 1999 and 2004, and
sales
 were 15
millios
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million
millions
 and 47
million
.
Coffee
 in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom and
bananas
 in Switzerland
were
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apply
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increased dramatically.
According to
 From first table,
sale
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sales
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 of Sweden
coffee
was
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were
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 the lowest in 1999 and 2004. Sale of Shifter land was stopped from 3 to 6
million
 and
sales
 of all the five countries were increased by certain
million
 euro.
According to
second
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the second
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 table, It can be seen that to land
bananas’
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of bananas’
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 sale was the biggest and it increased by over three times. Sweden and Denmark’s
sales
were
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decreased by almost half of all.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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