The chart below shows the destination of students graduated from physics courses and Art & Design courses in a European country in 2017.
The given chart displays the destinations of
students
graduating from Art
& Design
and Physics
courses from
a European country in 2007.
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Overall
, it can be seen the number of students
choosing full-time employment was highest while
the number of students
who were unemployed was the least
one.
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lowest
To begin
with, the number of Physics
students
chosing
full-time employment Correct your spelling
choosing
are
nearly twice Correct subject-verb agreement
is
more
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apply
than
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that
Art
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of Art
Design
students
around 70 and 40 students
respectively. In contrary
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contrast
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unemployed
Art
& Design
students
were fewer than Physics
students
with around 27 for the former and 30 for the latter.
Moving on to the other destinations, Art
& Design
students
who participated in both postgraduate study and part-time job
are slightly more than Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Physics
students
. In particular
, there were 35 Physics
students
and 38 Art
& Design
students
who chose postgraduate study. Also
, there were 32 Art
& Design
students
and 30 Physics
students
chose
part-time Correct pronoun usage
who chose
job
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jobs
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