The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.

The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling

abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese

tourist market.

Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.
The bar
graph
illustrates the number of
Japanese
people who travelled abroad between 1985 and 1995
whereas
the line
graph
outlines data about the percentage of
Japanese
tourists in Australia’s market.
Overall
, the trend of
Japanese
tourism increased over ten years,
in particular
, reaching its peak in the
last
years. As for the bar
graph
, the number of
Japanese
tourists travelling abroad trebled, starting at 5 and reaching its utmost at 15 million people. The value shows a steady growth until 1990,
then
the number of people going abroad declined slightly to just over 10 million in 1991.
Finally
, the figures jumped significantly during the second half of the decade. As regards the line
graph
, Australia’s share of Japan's tourist market witnessed a sharp increase from 1985 to 1995. The percentage increased marginally until 1988 by 2%,
then
the value decreased slightly in the following year to just over 4%.
In contrast
, the percentage of
Japanese
tourists travelling to Australia soared considerably, reaching its peak at 7% in 1993
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