Is forcing students to study hard at school a good idea. Agree or disagree?

Since education has become a crucial part of

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lives, many argue about the

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which is created by forcing them to have an excessive load of studying. In my point of view, I believe that the increasing of those pressures on the

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and university is a good thing. In my opinion, it is sensible that the

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Is on the

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and university as it potentially helps

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gain discipline and responsibility. By letting

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encounter distress, automatically, discipline and responsibility will be established as a natural habit.

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, at Perth Modern High

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in Australia, have to

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enormous amount of homework daily.

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, Perth Modern's student have excessive outcome grades at all times a 100% finish their tasks. There are benefits of

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on the

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agree with the idea of forcing

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to study hard as it is the necessity for early preparation to compete in global job markets that

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rigorous schooling beneficial. Education is a crucial part of

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lives as it enhances our skills : analysing, calculating and so on, and studying hard helps

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fully improve those skills.

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, Asian

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, specifically, Chinese and Vietnamese

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spend at least 4 to even 10 hours per day on learning. And as we can see most

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, who won the International Math Olympiad, are Chinese and Vietnamese. By forcing

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to study hard, we maintain an educated generation, and, they can develop our community in the future.

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forcing the student to study hard, and, letting them experience

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or university can help them improve their skills and establish disciplinary, responsibility.

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, I strongly agree with that point of view.