IELTS Writing Task 1: 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
In
this
case, The provided table illustrates about travel mode change in England between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
, The distance
in miles travelled per person per year increased in aggregate between 1985 to 2000. Furthermore
, there are almost all modes got increment distance
in 2000 except walking, bicycle, and local bus.
Accordingly
, the Car is the most favourable either in 1985 or 2000. People could travel an average of 4806 miles a year with that vehicle, which is more than 80% of the total distance
. On the contrary
, in 2000 bicycles and taxis had a low level of demand. Despite that condition, the usage of taxis had grown significantly, from 13 to 42 per year per person.
Besides
the demand growth, the data indicate that in 2000, there was a potential mode switch from local buses to long-distance
buses and trains. Approximately 150 miles decreased on the local bus, which shifted the mode to the other listed public transportation which gets a higher number of range.
To conclude
, The travel distance
in 2000 is higher than 15 years before and there is a potential switch in public transport options.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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