The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.
The given table illustrates the comparison of
students
' enrollment in Manchester University over an eighty-year period from 1937 to 2017.
From an overall
perspective, it is evident that the percentage of new
enrolled Change the adjective
newly
students
who came from oversease
saw an upward trend, Correct your spelling
overseas
whereas
a reverse pattern can be seen in the figure for domestic students
who came from within 40 miles of Manchester.
To be more specific, the total number of new pupils who took part in Manchester University significantly rose from 327 persons in 1937 to 1133 in
1133 persons in 1967, before reaching a peak at 6254 persons in the final year. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, the proportion of female new students
were
45% at the beginning of the period, compared to 55% in that of male ones. After decreasing to 35% in 1967, there was a fluctuating rise in the ratio of women pupils to the highest value, at 55%. Change the verb form
was
In contrast
, before rising to 65% in 1967, the data on men pupils sharply fall
to 45% in the next fifty years.Wrong verb form
fell
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