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The chart belows show the depth of snow (cm) in a particular resort in canada in three individual years

The chart belows show the depth of snow (cm) in a particular resort in canada in three individual years
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The bar graph presents the deepness of snowfall in
centimeters
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 of a ski resort in Canada for three separate years.
Overall
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, the data shows the increased depth of snow in a 6 month period which doubled in the second half with the highest in April and the lowest in December of
year
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 two. Pertaining to all 3 years, they stood nearly the same in the depth of snow which is 100cm, less than 100cm and more than 100cm respectively.
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, after 2 months, the first and second
year
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 significantly rose adding about 25cm and 30cm of buildup
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year
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 two showed the lowest accumulation among the distinct years in December at around 70cm.
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, February to April presented snow accumulation that doubled from the past 3 months all
year
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 long. April recorded the highest depth of 450cm from the second
year
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, it is noticeable
year
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 three dropped from 350cm to 300cm in the
last
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 month.

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