Retaking driving test every fiver year is beneficial according to some. Do you agree or disagree?

In certain

countries

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one has to renew his licence after every 5 years. Driving is an activity that requires extreme caution to avoid loss of lives

hence

the need to do all

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is

nescessary

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necessary

to preserve it.

However

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this

measure is received with

controvesy

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controversy

, in which some say it is beneficial,

while

others think

other wise

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otherwise

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. In

this

essay,

i

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will discuss the advantages of

this

matter over its

disavantages

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disadvantages

to explain why

i

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disagree with

this

idea. The ministry

insist

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that motorists should retake driving tests every five years.

This

law serves to

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individuals if they are still able to

drive

effectively and efficiently. It is believed that with the passing of

time

as people age, a lot happens and it is most likely that some people might not be in good health to

drive

. Another thing, after getting a licence

the

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first

time

nobody knows if

every

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everyone

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is going to have a car to

drive

on a regular basis and

gaining

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experience.

Therefore

, these constant retests will ensure that each and every driver is still

aquaited

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acquainted

equated

with the traffic rules and regulations.

On the other hand

, it is argued that

this

is just an act of

fund raising

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where

by

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these institutions make money out of bookings made each

time

they come for

test

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. Considering the fact that driving is not a complicated technique, when one masters it the first

time

it is undoubtedly impossible to lose the skill.

Beside

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with

this

age and

time

where there are a lot of cars around, there is

noway

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a person can stay the longest without driving and gaining more experience over the years.

However

, in my opinion,

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suggest that only those who

drive

public transport should go for retesting. The rest should not be bothered by

this

law. In conclusion,

it is clear that

this

system of retesting drivers is a waste of people's

time

and resources because there is no way a

grown up

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person might lose his driving skills even if they stay the longest without being on the

stearing

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steering

. Rather, the

governmants

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government

governments

should emphasise

on

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medical tests,

for

example

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eye

test

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to check if these drivers can still see clearly.