The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table provides key information about individuals who studied in six various fields at a university in Australia in 2011.
Overall
, it can be seen that female
students
represented the majority in studying Humanities, Education, Science, and Physics.
In addition
,
students
who were not native to English accounted for the second
percentage
for learning Science,
whereas
the ratio of pupils born abroad was the lowest for studying it.
According to
what is shown,
however
, the proportion of female
students
who studied Humanities was, 72% which was the highest one among all
students
, the
percentage
of pupils who were not native English speakers and joined the same department was the lowest one, at 12%.
Furthermore
, the ratio of individuals born outside Australia who had studied Physics and Information Technology was the same as the
percentage
of female
students
who studied Physics, at 56% In terms of studying Engineering, it was the top, at 48% for
students
born abroad,
in contrast
, the
percentage
of female
students
was the lowest, at 15%.
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