You were studying in an English-speaking country and suddenly had to go back to your home country your course is incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher - Thank you - Explain the reason why you did not finish the course - tell me what you liked most about this course while studying the course

Dear Mr Thomas, The reason why I am

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addressing

you is to let you know my gratitude for your guidance and support which you gave me during my studies and to clarify my situation.

Initially

, I would like to express my gratitude for your lessons. I did not know some of the experiences with speaking skills until I took the course. I really appreciate you because you were so kind and polite when I first came to

this

institution.

Moreover

, I have enriched my knowledge thanks to your beneficial speaking lessons.

Thus

, I am pleased with you.

However

,even though I wanted to continue my studies, I had to go back home because recently it was the birthday of one of my family members.

In addition

, I am now continuing to study independently based on the instructions from the previous lessons. I really liked your diverse teaching styles, especially your conversational method. I am happy with it because it has improved my speaking skills a lot. I hope you will accept my thanks and reply soon. Yours sincerely, Isabella Smith

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Task Achievement

Ensure the reason for leaving the course is clear and realistic. Currently, the reason mentioned appears superficial for such a drastic action.

Task Achievement

Add more details about how you plan to complete the course or your intentions for the future regarding your studies. This will make the letter more complete and show your commitment to your education.

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Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid using casual expressions and ensure that your gratitude and compliments are expressed formally.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use a variety of sentence structures and ensure each paragraph flows smoothly into the next for better coherence.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider using more linking words to connect ideas more effectively within and between paragraphs.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

179 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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