While
some
museums
are free, other
museums
are required to pay
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for
entrance
. I think having admission
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for
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advantages
are Unnecessary verb
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outweigh the disadvantages.
This
essay will delve into why the
advantages
of having
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for
museumCorrect article usage
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ticket
is Unnecessary verb
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outweigh its
disadvantageFix the agreement mistake
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.
Free
entrance
museums
give
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opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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to
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,
as improvingChange preposition
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their knowledge in
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of fields.
Therefore
, visiting
freeAdd an article
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museum
is
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opportunity to spend valuable time with
lovedCorrect pronoun usage
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.
However
, there are valuable
advantages
forChange preposition
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free
museums
, I consider that
museums
need to charge because protecting our cultural
heritagesFix the agreement mistake
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and historical valuables are duty for everyone.
Instead
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that Correct determiner usage
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offering special
serviceFix the agreement mistake
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according to
the annual plan would be more important. Take,
for example
,
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Mongolia, there are events organized annually
such
as
Museum
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and
people
can visit there
freeChange preposition
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during these days.
However
, buying
ticketAdd an article
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for
museumCorrect article usage
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entrance
means protecting our cultural heritage and historical valuables.
This
is because
museum
requires plenty of costs for their normal operation and governments are allocated a lot of budgets for
this
sector.
However
,
this
allocation generally is not enough for normal
therefore
,
entranceAdd an article
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fee
of
museums
usually is spent for protection.
For example
,
this
fund is spent
forChange preposition
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fixing
museum
buildingFix the agreement mistake
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and buying special chemicals for
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protection.
As a result
, paying for
museum
entrance
means contributing normal operation of
museums
.
Another important aspect
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why
people
need to pay for
museum
ticketFix the agreement mistake
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is the importance of value. Normally, if
people
pay for something from their pocket, they will realize as
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valuable.
Furthermore
, visitors may more pay attention
forChange preposition
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the
speechFix the agreement mistake
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of curators because they
dedicatedWrong verb form
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their time and money
forChange preposition
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
As a result
/
consequently
people
may gain more knowledge than
people
who entered free.
To conclude
, having
feeAdd an article
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for
museumCorrect article usage
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should be suggested and
this
perspective’s
advantages
are more outweigh than disadvantages.
However
, offering free
museums
offerCorrect subject-verb agreement
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possibilities to enhance other’s knowledge, it can be offered for
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special
eventFix the agreement mistake
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or only for
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of
people
.
Therefore
, I believe that contributing
historyChange preposition
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and cultural heritage is everyone’s responsibility.