The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of followers of famous Instagram Influencers in 2019 and 2021. The unit is millions. Overall
, Selena Gomez had the most fans among them in 2018, but Cristiano Ronaldo's followers had the highest number
in 2021.
The number
of followers of all influencers was similar in 2018. Although
Cristiano Ronaldo, Ariana Grand, and Selena Gomez had over 100 million
fans, The Rock and Kylie Jenner could not have over 100 million
. On the other hand
, after three years, the number
of fans of all influencers on Instagram skyrocketed by approximately 200 million
.
The Rock increased by roughly 150 million
for 3 years. Additionally
, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner also
reached 250 million
. In contrast
, only Selena Gomez could not approach 250 million
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