The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables show the amount of money spent on
Fairtrade
coffee
and
bananas
in 2 different years in the
UK
,
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Overall
, the
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
rose in all five countries,
whereas
only three out of five countries saw an increase. In fact,
UK
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the UK
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saw by far the highest levels of spending on both products. In 1999,
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
, at 3
million
,
while
revenue from
Fairtrade
bananas
was the highest in
UK
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the UK
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. By 2004,
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
in the
UK
had risen to 20
million
, which is over three times higher than the
sales
of
Switzerland
in that year.
Also
, there were dramatic increases in
sales
of
Fairtrade
bananas
in both
Switzerland
and the
UK.
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UK
with revenues rising by 32
million
and 4.5
million
respectively.
Sales
of
two
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the two
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products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
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increase in
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee
can be seen in all three countries, but their revenues were lower or equal to 2
million
.
Finally
, it is noticeable that
sales
of
Fairtrade
bananas
in Sweden and Denmark actually fell.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fairtrade, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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