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The table given below provides information about the projected costings over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.

The table given below provides information about the projected costings over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
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The table illustrates data regarding the estimated expenditure of the projects that focus on forestry in the long term over the subsequent 5 years in three areas of the world,namely,West
Africa
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,Central America and Southeast Asia,
whereas
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 the pie chart gives information about how costings are allocated in terms of. Four primary factors.
Overall
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,what stands out from the graphs is that The forecast reveals that in South
Africa
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,projects will require the largest amount of money. With regard to the table,costings of strategies that aim to create sustainable forestry in Southeast
Africa
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 are estimated to be the largest with 30 million
dollars
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.Afterwards,it is predicted that the figure for West
Africa
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 will decline considerably to 20 million
dollars
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 before increasing significantly until the end of the period.Values of plans in Central America are twice as much as those in West
Africa
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.
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 the number of expenditure in the former are estimated
initially
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 to decrease to 5m
dollars
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 and
then
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, to remain unchanged,the anticipation indicates that there will be a significant decrease in the figure for the latter to 3.5 m
dollars
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at the end
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 of a period. Shifting the focus to the pie chart, the wages of workers will be responsible for the largest amount of the funds with half and it will rank first among the four factors.Set-up costs are anticipated to be another significant source of spending with almost a third.Meanwhile,the allocation for training and office expenses is predicted to account for the same share of one-tenth.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable forestry
  • projected costings
  • expenditure breakdown
  • financial commitments
  • trends
  • stability
  • funding
  • allocation
  • biodiversity preservation
  • carbon sequestration
  • sustainable land use
  • environmental conservation
  • speculation
  • long-term benefits
  • continuous investment
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