The bar chart below shows the popularity of popular Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
The bar chart below shows the differences between the popularity of popular
Instagram
accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Overall
, Selena Gomez had the highest number of followers
on Instagram
in 2018. However
, Cristiano Ronaldo and The Rock did not have much fun on social media in 2018. Meanwhile, Ariana Grande was more popular on Instagram
than Kylie Jenner in 2018.
According to
the data, Selena Gomez had 130 million
followers
on her page in 2018, at the same time Cristiano Ronaldo had 110 million
followers
on Instagram
. Nevertheless
, Cristiano Ronaldo's number of followers
on Instagram
rose to 300 million
in 2021. Selene Gomez’s followers
only rose to 240 million
on Instagram
at one point.
Ariana Grande had 120 million
followers
on Instagram
in 2018. The difference between The Rock and Kylie Jenner was 10 million
followers
in 2018. In 2021, however
, they had the same followers
on Instagram
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