The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides general information and
statistic
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statistics
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about
metro
systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Overall
, it is evident from the data that the most used railway system is located in Tokyo.
Also
, the size of
route
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the route
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have
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a positive correlation with
an
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apply
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age, with a small exception for Kyoto and Los Angeles. It is interesting to note that, the
metro
in Tokyo is the third by size,
however
has the biggest flow of passengers, the number of commuters is bigger than in the London
metro
for
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approximately 1200 million users.
In contrast
,
the
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another
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Japan's
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Japan
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metro
system has
a
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the
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lowest number of passengers per year,
additionaly
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additionally
, the route is shorter than
on
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the newer Los Angeles underground by 17
kilometers
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kilometres
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. It is noticeable that
,
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the railway system in Washington DC has
relatively
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a relatively
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small number of users for
such
distance
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a distance
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. The
nearest by size
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nearest-by-size
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metro
sytem
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system
has a 10 times bigger passenger flow.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway
  • kilometers of route
  • passengers per year
  • extensive network
  • age of the system
  • analyze
  • correlation
  • outliers
  • notable comparisons
  • trends
  • commuter volume
  • inauguration date
  • modernization
  • historic
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • operate
  • transportation hub
  • utilization
  • frequency of service
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