The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides general information and
statistic
about Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
metro
systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Overall
, it is evident from the data that the most used railway system is located in Tokyo. Also
, the size of route
Add an article
the route
have
a positive correlation with Change the verb form
has
an
age, with a small exception for Kyoto and Los Angeles.
It is interesting to note that, the Correct article usage
apply
metro
in Tokyo is the third by size, however
has the biggest flow of passengers, the number of commuters is bigger than in the London metro
for
approximately 1200 million users. Change preposition
with
In contrast
, the
Correct article usage
apply
another
Correct quantifier usage
apply
Japan's
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Japan
metro
system has a
lowest number of passengers per year, Change the article
the
additionaly
, the route is shorter than Correct your spelling
additionally
on
the newer Los Angeles underground by 17 Change preposition
apply
kilometers
.
It is noticeable thatChange the spelling
kilometres
,
the railway system in Washington DC has Remove the comma
apply
relatively
small number of users for Add an article
a relatively
such
distance
. The Correct article usage
a distance
nearest by size
Add a hyphen
nearest-by-size
metro
sytem
has a 10 times bigger passenger flow.Correct your spelling
system
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