Some people think that ambition is essential fo success. To what extend do you agree?
Being an ambitious person and having a strong desire to succeed is one of the main feelings that help us to be stronger. Some people argue that it is crucial to achieve their goals.
However
, I partially agree with this
statement because there are many other skills, feelings and thoughts required to accomplish our goals.
Firstly
, it is well-known that ambition could help our motivation to remain intact daily and help us to stay focused on our targets, which is explained from psychological and biological sources owing to our flight or fight response being switched on. For example
, a lot of neurotransmitters are released, such
as dopamine and adrenaline.
However
, there are other attributes that are vital for achieving our dreams such
as discipline, consistency, and hard work as well as
opportunities should
be leveraged. Correct pronoun usage
that should
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo was raised in impoverished circumstances, however
, nowadays is one of the best soccer players worldwide. All of this
related
to long routines of training and Add a missing verb
is related
keep
practicing by fixing errors. Verb problem
apply
On the other hand
, Miley Cyrus won The Grammys's
Prize by performing Change noun form
Grammys
its
best song "Flowers". Correct pronoun usage
their
her
his
Nevertheless
, there were many sacrifices behind her success. Hence
, both cases were not only about talent but also
improving
themselves by working hard Change preposition
about improving
everyday
.
Replace the word
every day
To sum up
, many skills and sacrifices will boost our careers to achieve our dreams. Then
, it is
required more than just ambition to keep performing all of the yearly, monthly, and yearly tasks until Unnecessary verb
apply
succeed
. Wrong verb form
succeeded
Then
, people should be aware of all of these skills and characteristics.Submitted by luciaagudelomotta on
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