Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art evrnts. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that the states

needs

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to spend funds in the sports and art sector in high

school

rather than spend money on professional sports and art events .

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essay

agree

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with the statement because

lack

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the lack

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of development in

this

sector led talented

students

to choose

another

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other

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subjects and schools

also

need

high

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experienced teachers

for

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enhance student

perfromance

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performance

. Primary , most of the high schools

lack

sports infrastructure and art

center

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facilities .

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, only

few

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school

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schools

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have professional

coach

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for

students

as well as

for arts because unable to afford professional teachers .

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,

students

do not have knowledge of what safety measures should

take

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place

while

playing

in

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the field .

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, most of the rural schools in

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India

could not

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afford

experience

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experienced

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teacher

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and

students

have

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a

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lack

of

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information regarding safety measures.

Therefore

, government should spend money on the development

in

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the physical course for the

students

and safety measures

also

. Another reason is

students

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lack

of knowledge regarding

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subjects

led

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them to choose

another intellectual subjects

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another intellectual subject

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in which they will not

succeeded

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according to

their expectations . At

this

stage ,student

face

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dissapointment

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disappointment

in their life and feel failure

due to

unable

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to accomplish what they

wanted

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because of

lack

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a lack

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of infrastructure which

include

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proper fields ,

proper

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and proper

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training .

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, many

students

in India choose science because they do not have resources in the

sport

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field to rely on and build their

career

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. In conclusion , It is

inveitably

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inevitably

inevitable

true that

govenemnet

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government

should spend funds on

the

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school

students

for their games

as well as

arts

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the arts

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center

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centre

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so that children will choose their best

interest

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undoubtedly and

school

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can afford professionals for the growth of the children.