Shopping has been the most preferred pastime activity among youngsters in many cities, Majority of young individuals use these as their means of relaxation these days.In my opinion, the disadvantage of
these
trend exceeds the benefits it poses as it leads to loss of money and waste of time. Correct determiner usage
this
This
occurs Linking Words
as a result
of social media influence, the Linking Words
quist
to keep up Correct your spelling
quest
to
the latest fashion trend, peer pressure and social status.
Change preposition
with
Firstly
, the rate at which young Linking Words
people
buy Use synonyms
cloths
and accessories nowadays has been on the rise as they want to keep up the fashion trend. Frivolous spending by Correct your spelling
clothes
people
on material items Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
smart phones
, costumes and dresses Correct your spelling
smartphones
lead
to loss of money Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
financial
burden. Correct word choice
and financial
Moreover
, the Linking Words
advertisement
by celebrities in movies and on television Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
causes
Wrong verb form
cause
awarness
of new items on the market and Correct your spelling
awareness
hence
, the rush to Linking Words
ourchase
them to change Correct your spelling
purchase
the
wardrobe. Change the word
their
Furthermore
, peer pressure and social status Linking Words
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
another factor
for frequent shopping among young individuals. The need to keep up with with peers and maintain a certain social status Fix the agreement mistake
other factors
drive
youngsters towards impulse shopping.
Correct subject-verb agreement
drives
In addition
, a lot of cities do not have recreational centers for leisure activity Linking Words
such
as parks, clubs etc. which will help the youth to Linking Words
loose
stress after a long day at work. Replace the word
lose
Therefore
, most Linking Words
people
will prefer going on shopping trips with friends as Use synonyms
means
of spending their free time. To add to, technological advancement has brought about the availability of items on the Correct article usage
a means
internet
. Capitalize word
Internet
This
makes it easy to buy goods online without going to the shop, Shein is a typical example.
In a nutshell, shopping by young Linking Words
people
in their spare time is fun but leads to financial loss and Use synonyms
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
of
peer pressure as they Change preposition
in
are influence
to get those stuff because others have them. Change the verb form
are influenced
This
will reduce when recreational Linking Words
centers
are built in towns and cities to divert Change the spelling
centres
attention
of youngsters to healthy activities Add an article
the attention
such
as cycling, walking or jogging.Linking Words
dede