The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
The pie charts give data on different types of UK
tax
revenue and the total UK government spending
last
year. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that the main revenue source was
income
tax
,
while
the largest amount of
income
was spent on pensions. Another interesting detail is that the government allocated the least amount of
money
on transportation
last
year. Looking into details, regarding the
tax
income
,
income
tax
ranked first with 28%,which is followed by national insurance (21%). The percentage of
money
gained from value-added
tax
was 17%,
while
the figure for corporation
tax
was 8%. The remaining
income
sources were at just above a quarter,
total
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. In terms of government spending, the largest amount of
money
was spent on pensions at one in five,
while
Welfare ranked second with 17%. The percentage of
money
invested in Education was 14% which was twice as much as that in other spending and defence. The remaining industries were at just below one in five,
total
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